Flesh Consumed
A poem about a machine.
This is my response to day 23 of the Halls of Pandemonium writing challenge. Today’s prompt was to write a story or poem about a machine you saw in your dreams.
The image is of the 2017 art installation “Can’t Help Myself” by Sun Yuan and Peng Yu. The first time I saw it (not in person—unfortunately I never had that experience), it horrified and moved me. I drew major inspiration from it for this poem.
It was beautiful. Every gear, every wire, Every rod, every plate, Elegant in its placement I built the machine Pouring into it so much Blood and sweat I had no fluid for tears When I ignited it The machine devoured All it could see Leaving behind only carnage It hungered for more I fed it, fueled it Oiling its mechanisms Venting its burning exhaust When there was nothing left The machine turned to me It roared and lunged And swallowed me whole
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Very nice. One that lingers after reading.
Very golem!